This is honestly one of the most beautiful fics I have ever read (and I don't mean just suit fics, ALL OF THEM.) You've captured the characters perfectly, the prose is lovely and heart wrenching. I love the short little pieces, almost like a string of drabbles, that piece together this epic relationship between the two of them. They're like snapshots of the moments that build into everything. And most of all I love the opening and the ending. I love that everything comes full circle into THAT particular moment and that it's left open and a little ambiguous. In terms of critique, other than a few common typos, this piece was pure perfection. You've earned yourself a fan and I look forward to reading more from you.