ext_244300 ([identity profile] cestlavenus.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] abvj 2008-07-19 08:28 pm (UTC)

Only two comments so far? Really?!? I'm tempted to comment, like, a bajillion times just because this fic deserves it. Seriously. YOU MADE ME CRY. IT WAS INCREDIBLE.

I can't even tell you how much I loved the little details, like this line:

“You want to go get drunk?” He asks out of nowhere and she looks up to find him looking down at the file in his hands.

Because: SO TRUE. Poor Marshal, always looking at things-that-aren't-Mary when talking to Mary. :P

In conclusion: I love you now. <3

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