BEAR WITH ME AS I TRY TO FORMULATE COHERENT ENOUGH WORDS.
But oh, this is so so so great. I've been so excited to see what you created out of talking about them and their not-touching, carefully crafted. And this is so far beyond what I could have imagined, you just nail it all so perfectly. I love the one with him and her and her family, and then counter to the one dealing with his father's house. That's just gorgeous writing there.
and the end! you leave us with a "now" that is so evocative.
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Date: 2012-10-09 12:08 am (UTC)BEAR WITH ME AS I TRY TO FORMULATE COHERENT ENOUGH WORDS.
But oh, this is so so so great. I've been so excited to see what you created out of talking about them and their not-touching, carefully crafted. And this is so far beyond what I could have imagined, you just nail it all so perfectly. I love the one with him and her and her family, and then counter to the one dealing with his father's house. That's just gorgeous writing there.
and the end! you leave us with a "now" that is so evocative.
BASICALLY NEVER STOP WITH YOUR FLAWLESSNESS.