(Sorry I'm late to the party; I just found your story.)
This is just brilliant in its honesty and simplicity, and you've totally captured Mary's inner thoughts and motivations perfectly. She's messed up and selfish, she knows it, but she needs him anyway...
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branchandroot
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Date: 2009-08-30 02:57 pm (UTC)This is just brilliant in its honesty and simplicity, and you've totally captured Mary's inner thoughts and motivations perfectly. She's messed up and selfish, she knows it, but she needs him anyway...